Make any request clearer

A universal direct-request pattern. See what changed, then adapt it to your facts, role, and voice.

Mara delivering the example with a reserved expression and guarded posture
Before

Make any request clearer

“I just wanted to see if you might be able to help with something when you have time.”
  • —Main point is harder to find
  • —Language reduces conviction
  • —The next step stays unclear

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